Today I have been learning about energy.
One thing I found tricky was that i didn't understand somethings about energy.
It would be great if you could comment on my post and give me some feedback to make my learning better.
From Taylor
Wednesday, October 28, 2015
Tuesday, October 27, 2015
My OREO paragraph about lions
Hello, In class we have been using OREO paragraphs to persuade the reader to agree with us. We have been learning to use persuasive sentence starters. please enjoy my paragraph about lions, Here is my paragraph.
The amazing paragraph about lions
I strongly believe lions that are incredible. I believe this is true because lions are the greatest hunters in history. For example if a lion and a human had a race and they would have to bring the most food or meat, then the lion will obviously win. I believe that lions are the greatest kings of the jungle, and one day i would meet the king of the jungle.
The amazing paragraph about lions
I strongly believe lions that are incredible. I believe this is true because lions are the greatest hunters in history. For example if a lion and a human had a race and they would have to bring the most food or meat, then the lion will obviously win. I believe that lions are the greatest kings of the jungle, and one day i would meet the king of the jungle.
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